Sunday 29 January 2012

Six Sentence Sunday Erica's Choice #2

Last week I introduced you to Corey Wachawski, hero number one of my menage story due for release later this year. Today I thought I'd let you meet Dale Griffin, "Griff" to his friends. He's hero number two but no less integral to the story. This is his first meeting with the heroine he ends up sharing with his mate Corey.

Up close she wasn’t merely pretty, as he’d judged her. She was beautiful in a way that was soft, classic, like a fifties ingĂ©nue, with a body made for every modern-day sin Griff could imagine. And there were a lot of those. The way her mouth hung open in surprise had Griff’s mind instantly turning down Bawdy Street. He saw the pink, wet flesh of her tongue resting beyond the plump outline of her lightly glossed lips and was filled with a raw, powerful need to suck it into his mouth.

“This is Erica—Erica Shannon.”

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7 comments:

  1. Great description of her. Makes me want to find out more.

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  2. Excellent job! One of my favorite Six Sunday posts. But I gotta say it was hard to focus on what you wrote due to the distracting photo. HOT.

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  3. I love how you say his mind turned down 'Bawdy Street', LOL. Great Six!

    I'm new to Six Sentence and don't have my name up on the list, so if you wouldn't mind stopping by to check out mine if you have time, I'd appreciate it!

    http://jasmine-walt.blogspot.com/2012/01/six-sentence-sunday-first-post.html

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  4. Fantastic description! Great six!

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